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PostSubject: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptySat Oct 01, 2011 10:49 pm

Howdy y'all. This is my Nuzlocke of Black Version. It is read right to left, and this is kinda my project to make me draw better (and it's workin', sorta)
(and yes, I know I coded it wrong, I need pointers on how to fix it on here

Rules for self:
 

Here's a link to the Smackjeeves, but here's the table o' contents anyhow:
Table of Contents:
 
Chapter 2-Untitled*:
 

Extra's:
 
Old pages(ONLY COME HERE TO SEE CRAPYNESS AND PART-CRAPPYNESS:c3b4:
 

Characters (warnin', this may spoil what I caught, or somethin' else):
 

Cally:
 

Jhonny:c3b4:
 
???
???
???
Unfortunately dead:c3b4:
 
Bianica "Belle" Lauray:
 
Cheren Rinlin:c3b4:
 



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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptySat Oct 01, 2011 10:53 pm

I read some of it. Not bad, Godo.
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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptySat Oct 01, 2011 11:47 pm

That's a nice comic, Godo. Not the best but not the worst either. Keep up the good work, though.
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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptySun Oct 02, 2011 12:25 am

I read all four chapters so far, and I must admit that I found very few (minor) spelling mistakes, which is good. (To be exact, two.) You did quite a good job with drawing N and such, in my opinion.
Also, I'm not sure if it was a reference, but I personally loved Bel/Bianca's Lillipup being named "Odie."

Keep up the good work, as Silver said!
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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptySun Oct 02, 2011 12:42 am

Meguroco wrote:
I read all four chapters so far, and I must admit that I found very few (minor) spelling mistakes, which is good. (To be exact, two.) You did quite a good job with drawing N and such, in my opinion.
Also, I'm not sure if it was a reference, but I personally loved Bel/Bianca's Lillipup being named "Odie"
Thanks ya three. Yep odie's a reference, thanks for noticing Cool (no one on bulba or N F noticed...)
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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptySat Oct 15, 2011 7:26 pm

Remember that I was gonna redo the pages? Well, here's the first four pages:Re-1
Re-2
Re-3
Re-4
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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptySun Nov 20, 2011 4:16 am

Hey, I forgot to update it here... =_=;. Here's my Smackjeeves account, which is the second place to add another page when I get done. So far, I'm at page 13. (Yeehaw! My art's gettin' better XD)
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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptyMon Nov 28, 2011 10:45 am

Page 14-15 redone
The first page I did fully on the computer and...
Mizi Gajinka:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Derrick's Black Nuzlocke   Derrick's Black Nuzlocke EmptyMon Nov 28, 2011 4:40 pm

It looks kinda cute, actually.
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